Clarissa Frias
Defining Excellence in my Point of View
David
Books in his essay “It’s Not About You” defines excellence as “It’s the things
they did to court unhappiness”. My mom’s excellence is defined as her attending
St. Edward’s University, being head president of AAIP Association, and also
being the best at her job. My mom attending St. Edward’s University exhibits
excellence to me which though she did not finish she did two years of
university. Not only was she going to school but she had two full time jobs.
Aside from that my grandma was sick so she has to take care of her and the
household. My mom is also head president of the AAIP Association. She stared
off with just attending the meetings with her excellence building they voted
her president. She is the first Latina president from that association. The
people from the association didn’t believed in her but she proved them wrong
that anything is possible. Aside from being president from the association she
is one of the top person from her job. My mom is property and causality
underwriter. Till this day she is still taking classes and with those classes
come testing. She does it to further her job major. With all the excellence
that she has done and is doing I am able to attend college myself. My mom’s
excellence pushes me to do the best and never give up. With seeing her I
learned that you start from the bottom but you can always rise up no matter how
low you start from. The way David Brooks defines excellence is a different way
I define excellence. The way I define excellence is seeing my mom succeed. As Davis
Brooks said is his article “ It’s excellence, not happiness, that we admire the
most”. Those are the three ways I see excellence in my mom.
Dear Clarissa,
ReplyDeleteYou gave good examples of your mom. Overall you wrote a great paper with a few punctuation errors. 1.What is the AAIP Association? 2. What company is she a casual underwriter for? 3.How has your mom experience made you change?
Clarissa,
ReplyDeleteGood post. I hope you've shown your mother that you publicly bragged on her. Also, Tracy asked you good questions. When we perform blog revisions next week, you should consider this text.
- ks
Clarissa, good blog i think I can relate to you at the beginning of your bog.I still ask my self how am I here too.. But you can do it !!!
ReplyDeleteClarissa, good blog i think I can relate to you at the beginning of your bog.I still ask my self how am I here too.. But you can do it !!!
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